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22nd-Jul-2007 04:03 pm
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Done for [info]gen_remix. Look under the cut.


X-Factorial
(the Fray-Adjacent Remix)

July 2007

Season: Indeterminate, but probably 3rd or early 4th (Buffy)
Rating: G
Spoiler(s): None
Genre: All talk, no action
Length: 3,141 words
Main Character(s): Brief appearance by core Scoobies
Teaser: Who’s afraid of a spear-carrier? You might be surprised.
Acknowledgment: This story is a remix (done for [info]gen_remix) of “Frayed”, by [info]kerravonsen.

Disclaimer: Characters from Buffy the Vampire Slayer and Angel: the Series are property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, Kuzui Enterprises, Sandollar Television, the WB, and UPN.


 
They were not city-dwellers, for the seething press of numbers was unwelcome to them, jangling against the more meaningful communion they shared with one another. At the same time, they needed the cities, for now and again their metabolisms demanded that they extract certain lymph substances from involuntary donors (occasionally one of the donors survived), and only the relative anonymity to be found in human communities allowed them to do so without calling inconvenient attention to themselves.

Here, they had made their habitat in one of the several small forests that bordered the city on one side or another and dipped into its outskirts. They moved by night, slumbering in cool shadows during the day, for unobstructed sun had a dehydrating effect on their surface integuments. There was a name for their species, but that was unimportant; the significance lay in what they could — and had — become as a group.

The sun had set. They stirred, each unhurriedly from his place of repose, and gathered in the clearing that served them.

“I have dreamed,” vA-en said.

The others of the kuruse gave him suitable attention. vA-en was the most sensitive among them; his dreams did not always prove truest, but reliably came soonest. It would be unwise to disregard him, and this kuruse had not existed for longer than the nations of the New World by failing to heed pertinent signs. “Danger, or opportunity?” tU-rs asked.

“Danger,” vA-en replied promptly. “If this is true foreseeing, and not a ghost vision, it warns of danger.”

It was dO-im who posed the next obvious question: “Neartime, fartime, or between?”

Again the answer was immediate. “Near. Very near.”

There was no leader among them; this was not the nature of the kuruse. Still, tU-rs was the most decisive, and so usually made the decisions. “If this is so, or even probably so, we must dream together.”

The others did not even trouble to give assent, they merely moved together and positioned themselves for the joining. There were five of them — tU-rs, nY-br, vA-en, Es-ro, dO-im — and so they formed the five-point circle: each touching foot-to-foot with those on either side, each reaching out to join hands with the two across from him. Thus, every member of the kuruse was in direct contact with every other.

They let the contact grow, become closer. They withdrew from the external, opened themselves to the sharing-within. On each of them, the sense-pads positioned on torso and apex (light, sound, heat, and sub-aural vibration) relinquished their connections to central awareness; in each of them, touch became all, expanded and deepened. The clasped hands and braced feet shifted, flowed together, merged. Five separate nervous systems became one. Five minds touched, while remaining separate; shared, and knew the sharing; opened to one another, gave and welcomed, and pooled their knowing and being.

Together, they dreamed.

kuruse could be formed of as few as four, or as many as seven, but five was best for most purposes. Each member found and developed and offered his own specialty — perception, cunning, decisiveness, imagination, determination — and each relied on all others. They were a careful, meticulous, methodical species and, though their nature required congregation within a larger group, individual kurusei had little to do with one another. This particular kuruse had encountered no others of their kind in almost a century.

Irrelevant. They were sufficient within themselves.

They withdrew, carefully, resuming their separate identities but allowing the merge-bonds to remain. They had dreamed. They had seen. Now they would consider, and choose their path.

“The Slayer,” dO-im said.

“Yes,” tU-rs acknowledged. “We have dealt with a Slayer before. This time, however, the enchanters pose the greater danger.”

Es-ro observed, “The Slayer and her companion seek to protect the enchanters until they have worked the final magic. We can neither ignore them, nor allow them to occupy us fully.” He stood unmoving; the others waited, knowing he would speak when he had given it due thought. “Three of us to engage the standing fighters,” he said at last. “Two to attack the enchanters before they can destroy us.” Another pause. “dO-im and nY-br, I would suggest.”

“Yes,” nY-br said, and dO-im agreed, “Yes.”

“It is sound,” tU-rs pronounced. “We will dream again, to confirm.”

Once more, silent assent. The joining drew a toll from them, and it would be better if they had more time to recover … but the Slayer and her party would arrive within the hour, and with peril so close, the greatest need was to choose their course.

The dreaming allowed the kuruse to see, not just the future, but contingent futures. They could test each possible path, and see its outcome in advance without danger to themselves. It was a precious advantage, and they used it well. In other circumstances, they would have utilized the forewarning to take flight … but they faced only four, and — even if one was a Slayer — no such number could prevail against an enemy who knew their attack before they launched it, and could evaluate and choose the exact response that would nullify and destroy it.

After a time, they again withdrew. “Unexpected, but not unprecedented,” tU-rs said after a pensive pause. “Four of us, then, and one — dO-im — to kill the enchanters?”

“Perhaps not,” Es-ro said. “A different flanking movement could suffice. It was purest chance that the Slayer’s companion blundered into the path of the one we attempted.”

“It might be so,” tU-rs acknowledged. “Let us consider both courses, then.”

The third dreaming lasted longer, as did the silence that followed when the still-joined kuruse emerged from it. “Four times,” vA-en said at last.

“Yes,” nY-br agreed. “Unnoticeable in the first dream. Seeming accident in the second. But to see it twice again, in the third —”

“We thought the Slayer to be the most formidable enemy we would face,” vA-en mused. “This other, however, her companion … four times. It is most worrisome.”

“He has no power,” tU-rs objected. “No strength, no speed, no skill. He cannot defeat or even injure us. He is a hindrance, no more.”

“And he has hindered us in four paths now, by four different means, always to our downfall.” Es-ro’s tone was as grave and unsettled as vA-en’s had been. “I begin to fear this one.”

“He is a fool,” tU-rs insisted. “A blind, lucky fool. Even if he has some primitive instinct that prompts him toward avenues of potential risk, it cannot be more than instinct. This is our realm, we tread these roads as masters. He cannot withstand the true-sight of the dreaming.”

“We should flee,” nY-br said. “We have sought the clearest course to victory, and failed even to find survival. Better to withdraw, and reflect upon these matters when we can do so without danger to ourselves.”

“Time is short now,” Es-ro noted. “They will be very near. And … will it be possible for us to flee?”

It was a disturbing question. Again they deepened the joining, again sank into the dreaming, to quest down one branch after another, and then another, and another. Always, the same result. Flight, in whatever direction, and the seemingly powerless human stumbled into their path. Attack, defense, misdirection, ambush, fighting retreat … Sometimes he did nothing, sometimes they were undone by the Slayer or the enchanters (once, smashed by a massive truck as they attempted to escape across a highway); in every instance when there was an opportunity they might exploit, however, he blundered through and ruined it utterly.

They emerged at last, and stood without speaking for long, long. “We have gone too far,” Es-ro observed at last. “We have given too much of ourselves to fruitless searching. Even if one final dream showed us a way of escape, that dreaming would leave us too weak to take it.”

“He is doom,” vA-en said quietly. “He is destroyer. He is weaver of shrouds, builder of tombs. He has come to gather us, all our power regardless.”

“He is a fool,” tU-rs said again. “And, yes, he is our doom. It is impossible understand, impossible that it should be, but clearly it is so.”

“We die, then?” nY-br asked.

“In every path we have seen,” dO-im agreed.

“Yes,” tU-rs said suddenly. “Yes, everywhere we have seen. Our only hope, then, small as it may be, is to attempt some course we have not seen. To travel blind, to fight as humans do. That way is almost certain disaster … but all the paths we have mapped show certain death.”

The others of the kuruse considered. Yes, his reasoning was sound. Better a negligible chance than none. What course, then? They had tested all they could imagine; what remained?

“Full merge,” dO-im announced.

Stunned silence, then bracings for rebellion, then slumping acceptance. There truly was no choice. “It is as much an end as death,” vA-en pointed out. “Only legends speak of any kuruse returning from such.”

“That is so,” tU-rs said. “But it is an undreamed path. And it will allow us to fight. To better fight than we could now, drained as we are.”

He waited for refusal, for some other desperate suggestion. Neither came.

None was eager to proceed, but there was nothing to be gained by delay. They had maintained the first link in the joining; now they furthered it, opening channels that had been kept sealed, removing the last barriers. Muscle tissue, cartilage, nerve fibers flowed together, interwove, sorted and rearranged and thickened and firmed. Distinct forms became less so, the spaces between them dwindled and vanished, separate awareness surrendered to a central mind, and — body and consciousness — five became one.

It was a loss beyond description. Individuality was the quality prized most among their species; the kuruse was not a hive nor even a pack, but an intricate construction of distinct elements to form a greater whole. The total merging now complete had sacrificed all of that. No balance of minds, no complementarity of talents and attributes, no dynamic latticework of knowledge and assessment and understanding and judgment. Instead, the figure that stood in the center of what had been the joining-circle was, by comparison, a lump. Far below the capability of a functioning kuruse, less even than any of its constituent members … it was an awful reduction, from which there was little to no possibility of recovery.

The single advantage to the merging was physical. Each member of the kuruse had stood roughly as tall as the Slayer and massed slightly more; the combined form would tower over her, six times her weight and well past twice her strength, its nervous system so diffused and quintuple-redundant that it had no weak spots, no vital point that could be pierced or broken to kill or incapacitate. It was a hulk, a bludgeon, suited to forge through any opposition and crush its chosen target.

They had known what they were doing to themselves. They had facilitated their own dissolution, in full recognition that they almost certainly would never return. Each, as he surrendered all-that-he-was to this last desperate measure, had sealed the final thought into the amalgamating consciousness: what must be done.

Ignore the Slayer, other than to overcome whatever resistance she might pose to its central mission.

Eliminate the enchanters if possible, but let them not distract from the more important purpose.

Focus solely on the fool who had doomed them.

Drive to him, regardless of any hurt or opposition or other consideration.

Reach him.

Seize him.

Kill him.

*                              *                              *

Giles was keenly familiar with this particular ritual, though normally it took place in the library. The ‘Scoobies’ were in celebration mode: another threat had been met and vanquished, without serious cost or even serious danger. Now it was time for popcorn, brownies, cappuccino (or tea, or root beer, as personal taste dictated), and the endless giddy chatter of the tediously frivolous adolescents who were, no question, the brightest lights to be found in the entire human race.

The expedition just past had been, perhaps, a bit more chancy than his charges realized. His source material had been less precise than he might have preferred, referencing the demon they sought in terms that could easily be interpreted as indicating either an individual or a communal group. Further, it had somehow become aware of their presence before he and Willow had begun to prepare the spell that would consume it. Finally, it had been substantially more powerful — and tenacious — than they had been led to expect, and frantic effort had been required to keep it occupied until the spell could be completed.

Thank heaven there had been only one. Three or four such creatures could have proven deeply problematic. Just another example of how the most carefully formulated plans could still be thrown off-course by the presence of a single unknown, the ‘x-factor’ that insisted upon intruding into real-world events …

“Hey, Crumpet Man,” Xander called from that area which Americans termed the ‘living room’. “You ever think of investing in a more comfortable couch?”

“It suffices for my needs,” Giles replied, with that trace of asperity suitable to the role to which they had assigned him and upon which they seemed to rely. “Particularly if one uses the cushions.”

Xander’s response was a broad gesture that took in his female companions. Willow was lolling back on two cushions, her eyelids beginning to droop, and Buffy occupied a mound accumulated from every source within reach. “Foiled again by the sisterhood,” he lamented.

“Oh, come on, Xander.” Buffy lofted a cushion to land in his lap. “You know you belong to the sisterhood, too.”

Xander nodded. “And my heart swells with pride, every single time you say that.”

None of the inner wince showed through Giles’ practiced reserve. He knew all too fully, from his own experience, that self-deprecating humor could be a mask for pain as easily as it might serve as a means of coping. “Given the calibre of that sorority,” he interjected dryly, “I may only hope I shall someday be also included in its roster.”

Buffy’s smile was bright, fond, sincere, and unconcerned. “We might have to adjust the dress code, ’cause we know you’ll never change yours. I’ll bring it up at the next secret meeting.”

She was a lovely young woman, as good-hearted as she was courageous. Pity, Giles reflected, that none of her virtues ever seemed to manifest themselves in the faintest trace of thoughtfulness. The heedless comment imputing lack of masculinity to one of her dearest friends was far from being the only example of her habitual lack of consideration; almost as pertinent (and in some ways more obvious) had been her hogging of the cushions, apparently oblivious to the ever-so-casual care with which Xander moved and held himself, following the struggle in the forest.

Fortunately for them all, the Kuruse demon had apparently been too slow-witted to recognize that the petite female was a more formidable warrior than the taller, slower, weaker male accompanying her. Time and again it had swatted her away, its clay-like flesh flowing away from her attacks but solidifying whenever the Kuruse launched a strike of its own … and, time and again, failed to follow up its momentary advantage, instead turning away to lumber in pursuit of Xander. Xander had recognized what was happening before Buffy did, and played it for maximum effect, capering around the massive creature, dancing and taunting and holding its attention while Buffy repeatedly recovered and returned to the fray. Together they had kept the demon occupied until Giles and Willow (more specifically, Willow with Giles’ tutelage) finalized the spell that bound and banished it … or perhaps destroyed, there was some uncertainty in the process, but in any event the creature was gone. Thus the victory party.

However, the pertinent issue was that, while Buffy’s parahuman resiliency had easily shaken off her adversary’s blows, those that had landed on Xander — fewer and glancing, fortunately — had left large, diffuse bruises on his torso that would doubtless take days to fade. Yet she had taken the cushions, and tossed him one (one!) without seeming to consider that he might have more need of her hoard than she did.

He had interposed his own body between the Slayer and the thing that threatened her, and seemed to see nothing remarkable in the fact. This was to his credit, if somewhat foolish and unrealistic. Less laudable was that Buffy appeared to have an equally matter-of-fact attitude regarding his actions.

Giles sighed, pensively studying the contents of his teacup. This could not continue; the boy’s contributions were immensely valuable, if difficult to define, but they were decidedly not suited for combat. Inevitably he would be severely injured — more probably killed — unless they instituted some systematic change in tactics. Still, how were they to go about protecting the young man who was, in many ways, the valorous heart of their group, without taking the heart from him?

In the living room, Willow had slumped against Xander, and now burrowed into his shoulder without ever quite waking. He put an arm around her, and shifted her and himself to find the position best suited for them both. He looked down at the sleeping girl, limitless tenderness in his eyes and smile … and Giles saw with some startlement that Buffy’s face held the same expression as she watched Xander.

Perhaps the very casualness of the way she treated him was a subtle compliment that had meaning only for Xander. Perhaps she did not, in fact, take him for granted after all.

Giles had long since learned not to do so himself. Though Xander had given good service tonight, his efforts hadn’t truly been necessary, they could have managed easily without him … but they could not continue without him in the longer struggle, his loss would be a wound from which they might never recover. Something must change, some adjustment made that would serve to shield him from the sharpest perils they faced so regularly, but done in a way that didn’t cripple his morale.

This would require careful thought and subtle implementation, and Giles promised himself he would devote the necessary concentration to the task.

For now, best to let Xander enjoy the fruits of this night’s endeavors: the success of their mutual enterprise, the safety and happiness of those he loved, and the knowledge (or at least belief) that he had played a signal role in bringing about these things.

The boy’s courage was real and worthy of praise, and he was entitled to take pride in his conduct tonight … even if his actions had been largely unnecessary, and ultimately made little difference.

In the final analysis, some people were simply better suited to support roles.


end
 


And there you are. Don’t hesitate to offer commentary.

Comments 
22nd-Jul-2007 09:32 pm (UTC)
Ooooh!

I like your demons, what a cool invention. And the irony, ah, the irony of the attitudes to Xander.

Thanks!
23rd-Jul-2007 11:17 pm (UTC)
As I’ve already said elsewhere, I’m glad you liked it. And I rather enjoyed it myself; in fact, even though I was the one who wrote it, I still get cracked up by the last line.
23rd-Jul-2007 11:54 pm (UTC)
It's great when one writes something one enjoys re-reading, isn't it.
23rd-Jul-2007 02:30 am (UTC) - Nicely Done
While I remain rather proud of my own Remix of this story, this one is a far more detailed and rich retelling of the story--and one which encompasses Giles' respect for Xander's contribution to the group while acknowledging Buffy's own sentiments with the simple expedient of noting a moment's glance. My compliments. :-)
23rd-Jul-2007 11:18 pm (UTC) - Re: Nicely Done
This is probably the most successful remix I’ve done, in terms of a remix: telling a story from a different perspective, rather than rewriting it to suit myself. I’m happy with the way it turned out, and pleased that it seems to have been well received.

And you, you just keep popping up. You remixed my daughter’s story for [info]remix_redux, and beat me to the punch on this one (although fortunately, as I said elsewhere, I completed my own effort before discovering you’d gotten there first). It’s a good thing we had distinct visions of the thing, otherwise it could have been embarrassing.

As it happens, your pinch-hit for [info]izhilzha used the same story I probably would have chosen if I had decided to attempt one for her. Apparently we really do think alike, even though the results (as we have seen) tend to turn out differently.
25th-Jul-2007 05:23 am (UTC) - Re: Nicely Done
I was rather pleased when the pinch-hit Remix that the lovely Victoria P. assigned me was for your daughter. I had found her LiveJournal quite by accident during a vanity Google search a month or so before, and my initial comments there led to a new friendship that I was quite pleased about at the time Vic issued the call to duty. Her explanation of how and for how long she had been reading my stories had a significant impact on me--simple math and the demonstrable demographics of my Yahoo Group makes it clear that at least *some* people have been reading my stories from adolescence to young adulthood, but having a conversation with someone who actually *did* is a bit humbling.

As I told you a few years back, I did and continue to greatly appreciate the review of my work you posted on your personal site as one of the only examples of relatively detailed constructive criticism that has been devoted to my stories. I happen to treasure the fact that several hundred people love my stories enough to have subscribed to my Yahoo site and certainly wouldn't trade their devotion for much of anything; still, there are times that I wish that my works had annoyed someone enough to direct a good, nasty parody in their direction. That being said, the fact that a remarkable young woman like your daughter has enjoyed my stories enough over the years enough to spend a significant amount of her valuable time reading them means a lot to me, and I hope to continue to be worthy of that respect from her and everyone else who has granted me that courtesy.

23rd-Jul-2007 05:23 pm (UTC)
What a splendid story--the demons are very creative, very Other, and because this is a Xander-is-secretly-awesome story, I'm bookmarking it and may have to rec it in my journal.

I love Giles' perspective on Xander and the girls, here. Perfect, and the voices are all bang-on.
23rd-Jul-2007 11:19 pm (UTC)
I’ve done easier stories — a couple took me a single day, another required two, whereas this one occupied parts of four — but fewer that flowed more naturally. The whole thing was just there by the time I started writing; I added a few flourishes, but no twists or new scenes, it simply sat there waiting to be written.

Thanks for your observations. You’re usually appreciative, but that doesn’t mean I take it for granted. And I’m happy to see that [info]eilandesq finally filled in the blank that was left for you at [info]gen_remix. You did your part, it wasn’t fair that you should be left hanging.

Thanks again.
23rd-Jul-2007 10:40 pm (UTC)
You have taken a very short story and run with it. Your approach to the demon was very unique. It gave a wonderful depth and pathos to the big dumb brute demon of the original story. Of course I loved the fact that Xander was the key player to foiling them at every turn.

This probably isn't so much a criticism as an I wouldn't have done it that way. Your use of Giles to view the scene struck me a bit wrong. It's a matter of interpretation, but I don't think Giles had that level of sympathy for Xander at that point. Everything he says is true but I' would have expected him to be focusing in on Buffy or Willow. Had I done the story I'd likely have used Buffy's POV. I think most of the jarring was due to what initially sounded like Buffy bashing, cleverly averted when mention is made that this is how she complimented Xander by treating him like she expected him to be able to handle himself.

I am curious why the demons would exhaust themselves trying to find the perfect solution until retreat was no longer an option. For demons that seemed so methodical it rang a wrong note.

You've used a handful of words to highlight one of my favorite relationships in the Buffyverse, Xander and Willow. The image of her falling asleep on him and his fond glance was very endearing.
23rd-Jul-2007 11:23 pm (UTC)
You raised three points.

Use of Giles’ perspective. To you, it seemed out of character — or at least, not fully in character — with Giles’ known attitudes toward Xander at the time. To me, it served to show the contrast between what Giles lets people see, and what he sees and how he feels about it. We don’t express everything we think; these were thoughts at a particular time, that might not have pertained at another.

Potential Buffy-bashing: Yep, it was going that way. And then it didn’t. Not that Buffy hasn’t been pathologically inconsiderate at one time or another, but she wasn’t guilty this time. The whole shape of the story would have been different without that, and that wasn’t something I wanted just then.

Why did the demons exhaust themselves running down blind trails? They did consider flight, after the third dream. By then it was too late, their pursuers too close, and every flight-plan they attempted to dream out ended in the same disaster. Would it have been different if they’d tried evacuation earlier? No telling … but remember, these were things that had always been able to find a way either to win or to escape. I doubt it occurred to them that it wouldn’t prove possible to do either.

Interesting feedback. I may take another look at the story, see if anything needs tightening. Thanks.
24th-Jul-2007 02:26 am (UTC)
Giles is open to interpretation. Around that time I got the impression Giles primary feeling toward Xander is irritation. that said, the idea that he appreciates and values Xander appeals to me greatly.

I don't like character bashing, which is not to say I'm adverse to a character being shown in a bad light. You are certainly correct Buffy has been phenomonally inconsiderate at times.

Good point about the demons. It was just something that struck me.
25th-Jul-2007 05:41 am (UTC) - Pride Is One Of The Seven Deadly Sins. . .
. . .for a reason. Whether human, demon, or other is involved, declining to flee when fighting back is a potential and not completely suicidal approach will always be a temptation. While I do not mourn the fate of the kuruse, I have no difficulty in comprehending their motivations.
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